Feedback from other groups

Positives :
* Effective and detailed shot list
* Useful research into soundtrack ideas
* Research into director
* Everything is there
* Good shot list, detailed mentions props etc.
* Good sypnosis
* Good shot lists, very detailed
* Lots of colours, detailed shot list
* Lots of notes

Areas for improvement :
* No animatic on blog
* Mood board rather empty
* Not much practical information
* Mood board is weak (not many images)
* Analysis of 'This is England' should include video of opening sequence, not just a picture.
* Not many posts
* No animatic sequence
* Only 3 or 4 blogs
* Lots of videos but not much analysis
* Undetailed mood bored
* Not a lot of posts


Our group has learned that we have a very strong shot list, which has been a positive comment many people have made. However there are many improvements that need to be made, which we can see from the feedback, e.g - create more blogs, improve our mood board (adding more images and commentary about our ideas and reasons for designs it that way), and writing more about how we plan to interpret our ideas and inspiration from our research into creating our sequence. We also need to add our animatic storyboard onto our blog, as without it the people giving feedback found it harder to understand our ideas.